Caligula's Launderette

Psy - thank you :D for those lovely words xanthan - the 'epigone' I was referring to was the 'after born', the greek expedition to Thebes written in greek myth-history. ...

hmm...yes, I had a big think. (Oh my gosh! She thinks!) I've changed all of them into english, though the greeting is still up in the air as - Morning ...

Hmm, I see your point, m'dear even if I don't whole-heartedly agree. The reason I created the language was half for realism which you hit directly on the head, and ...

Bob, have you ever known me to put punctuation in a first draft... hehheh... I need to cure myself of that... off to punctuate the thang... thanks hon.

I love you Sarah, you are my HERO! okay...too much caffeine today perhaps. Well thanks for catching all of that, it is hard to type with a french keyboard, but ...

Oooo, Gal I really enjoyed this. Especially how I could see everything as if it was on stage. My favorite part was the girl's lines at the end. Bravo. CL

I will bow to the PUNC. Thanks bob.

I happen to not be a Christian, but enjoyed this immensely. I guess it's just part of the C.S Lewis genius. I recommend this book to anyone looking for a ...

heheh... I think I will give this to EL Mo for a christmas present. thanks guys. CL

thank you hon. CL

thanks hon. CL

This is going back to the drawing board, to work out the kinks, thanks guys. CL

I really like this, and as such am listing it for further critiquing. I should have this done by the end of the week (thats Sun). cheers hon, CL

Thanks Brian, I have to go back and start editing now...hehehe. Hmm...I suck at dialogue to begin with... cheers CL

Wait Superfreakazoid, that's you Ramona right? it's Pseudomuse. Thank you all for such loverly reviews, I'll have to work on the flow some. cheers CL